the Philadelphification of an Angipotamus

Last weekend, I went to Philadelphia and it was awesome. Melissa and I reviewed our progress on our children’s book and did some very important research at the zoo. Unfortunately it rained the whole time we were at the zoo, but it wasn’t all bad– it probably helped thin the crowds a bit. We bought awesome ponchos in the gift shop and had our fancy cheese picnic as planned under the shelter of a tree. Otherwise, the weather was gorgeous during my stay. We also hit the Philadelphia Art Museum, which holds an impressive collection of early 20th century art. The gift shop was also quite impressive.

I love the architecture of Philadelphia, steeped in history and grandeur. It was kind of surreal seeing shops like Banana Republic and Anthropologie housed in such ornate and stately buildings, and I was fascinated by the gargoyles inhabiting the corners of the UPenn campus.

Melissa and Cory took me to three awesome restaurants, and I had some of the most delicious meals of my entire life. I especially enjoyed our 2.5 hour brunch at Parc, followed by a visit to the park across the street, where we laid in the grass and really enjoyed being alive (and slightly tipsy) for a while. We also ate at Distrito and Han Dynasty. Yummy.

I really enjoyed hanging out with Lou, too. He got in bed with me every morning and we dozed and snuggled for a few more hours. He’s a great morning snuggler.  Melissa and Cory had Spanish class Tuesday night, and I was left alone in the apartment with him. Lou began making funny noises and I felt that he was trying very hard to communicate with me. He almost formed words at one point. I think he was probably trying to convince me that he had not been fed for days. I didn’t fall for it.

Here are a few of the photos I took in Philly. I can’t wait to go back!

99 things a Loupotamus likes

Loupotamus loves lots of things, here’s a list of things he likes. Can you help us find 99 things that Loupotamus likes? Comment below with your ideas! (updated on May 19 with reader’s suggestions) Keep ‘em coming!
  1. his mom (because this list was started on mother’s day)
  2. his dad (because he plays with me)
  3. peanut butter
  4. kisses
  5. walks
  6. pooping
  7. snuggling
  8. snagging chicken bones from the ground
  9. adventuring
  10. belly rubs
  11. strangers
  12. fluffy beds
  13. sleeping with mom & dad
  14. his kennel
  15. hippie
  16. his chew bone
  17. playing tug o’ war
  18. cheeseburgers
  19. lunchtime
  20. dinnertime
  21. breakfast time
  22. playing fetch
  23. chasing squirrels
  24. napping
  25. laying on the grass
  26. standing in kids pools
  27. looking out the window
  28. protecting his people (by barking at nothing)
  29. looking at his handsome mug in the mirror
  30. high fives
  31. smells. all. of. them.
  32. snuggling with Grams and Gramps when they come to visit
  33. doggie day care!!!!
  34. other dog’s toys
  35. little kids
  36. big kids
  37. pint-size kids
  38. kids with food on their hands
  39. kids with food on their face
  40. road trips to New Jersey, Alabama, Bed Bath & Beyond…really anywhere
  41. the exquisite taste of expensive shoes, especially ones with really high heels
  42. chasing squirrels
  43. laying in the sun
  44. laying in the shade
  45. laying on the grass
  46. playing fetch with the tennis ball, hippie, or anything else mom & dad throw
  47. cheese
  48. bacon
  49. steak
  50. carrots
  51. 47 -50 if mom would actually let him eat those things

Writing a children’s book is like….hard.

I know what you’re thinking, “how hard can it really be?”

It’s only a couple of hundred one or two syllable words and some slapstick comedy. Sounds easy enough right? It’s deceptively hard. Each word is excruiatingly important because you only have 500 words to tell your story in a way that captivates a 5 year old. I’m sure all the moms can attest that capitvating a five-year-old without an iPad or video is challenging! No wonder why so many children’s books are coming out as apps now.

This blog isn’t about me complaining how hard this journey is, it’s about working through the tough parts. It’s about showing the process, warts and all, which is why I wanted to share the struggle.

I think the process is made more complicated for me, because I work full-time and am notoriously a workaholic. It’s difficult for me to separate myself from my daytime career long enough to live in Loupotamus’s reality so that I might write about it. I’m still trying to figure out how to do that. I’m hoping that having Angie here over Memorial Day weekend will act as an inspiration.

Emma Coats is a ‘story artist’ for Pixar, and she’s been sharing some story basics on the Pixar blog. There are a few that really spoke to me, I thought I’d share them here in case they help others trying to write a story for children:

  • You gotta keep in mind what’s interesting to you as an audience, not what’s fun to do as a writer. They can be v. different.
  • Once upon a time there was ___. Every day, ___. One day ___. Because of that, ___. Because of that, ___. Until finally ___.
  • What is your character good at, comfortable with? Throw the polar opposite at them. Challenge them. How do they deal?
  • Come up with your ending before you figure out your middle. Seriously. Endings are hard, get yours working up front.
  • Finish your story, let go even if it’s not perfect. In an ideal world you have both, but move on. Do better next time.
  • When you’re stuck, make a list of what WOULDN’T happen next. Lots of times the material to get you unstuck will show up.
  • Putting it on paper lets you start fixing it. If it stays in your head, a perfect idea, you’ll never share it with anyone.
  • Discount the 1st thing that comes to mind. And the 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th – get the obvious out of the way. Surprise yourself.
  • If you were your character, in this situation, how would you feel? Honesty lends credibility to unbelievable situations.
  • No work is ever wasted. If it’s not working, let go and move on – it’ll come back around to be useful later.
  • Coincidences to get characters into trouble are great; coincidences to get them out of it are cheating.
 There are many others, so swing by their blog and check them out. What’s your biggest struggle when writing (whether it’s a story, an email, a paper for school)? How do you overcome it? How do you get in the groove to write?
Any tips and tricks are welcome.

ColorPage! (the first of many to come.)

Just in time for Mother’s Day– a colorpage for the kiddos! And also adults like me, who still love to color. If you want, you can see how I colored it over on my other blog.

All rights reserved © 2013 Angie Brown

If you have any trouble with the color page, or ideas about how to make it better, please let me know in the comments. Also I’d get a kick out of seeing how the kidlets color it. Kids make the best art.

What if Loupotamus went to the library…

Sniff, sniff. Sniff, sniff.

Everywhere Loupotamus looked, he saw food. Shelves and shelves of food. Pies, pumpkins, peanut butter, potatoes and pistachios. But everywhere he sniffed, he didn’t smell anything. Maybe his flat square nose was broken?

Sniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiff.

It was right there, but the leaning tower of cheeseburger smelled like nothing. At least nothing that made Loupotamus’s mouth water the way a cheeseburger did.

His tongue slopped at the cheeseburger, already drooling in expectation for the scrumptiousness that was sure to follow. Instead of tasting a mouthful of his favorite meal, a piece of thin plastic crinkled under his tongue.

Loupotamus was on a mission to solve the mystery of the missing food…..

******

The mystery may be solved later, consider this an extended commercial break.

During my last trip to the library, I wondered what it would be like if Loupotamus when to the library. That’s what inspired the book selections for this trip, what books would Loupotamus:

  • The Velveteen Rabbit by Margery Williams (selected because an agent told me the book reminded him of The Velveteen Rabbit – which neither I nor Lou have never read).
  • Three Samurai Cats by Eric A Kimmel (when Lou was a puppy he got beat up by some cats, he would want to read this book to learn how to defend himself against future attacks)
  • Daring Dog and Captain Cat by Arnold Adoff (because in Lou’s head, he’s a superhero)
  • Pilot Pups by Michelle Meadows (a tribute to his parents Air Force past)
  • I Want a Dog by Helga Bansch (a puppy sure would make life at home more exciting)
  • Monkey – A Trickster Take from India by Gerald McDermott (so would a monkey)

 

 

I am inspired by the Berenstain Bears

When I was young, I loved the Berenstain Bears. I really liked that over the course of a few books, I felt like I knew the characters – their quirks, their charms, their family. (Decades later, I now know that this is called a “parasocial” relationship, but that’s beside the point.)

I was delighted to learn that Jan and Stan Berenstain were Philadelphians. I romanticized that we would run into one another, and they would share with me all their worldly author advice.

Jan and Stan published their first book together in 1962. Since then, they published more than 200 books in the series.  I hope that the Loupotamus book becomes a series and that millions of kids and parents love Loupotamus and his antics, the way I loved the Berenstain family!

Stan passed away in 2005, and Jan in 2012 – just after I moved to Philadelphia. Their youngest son Mike now illustrates and write the Berenstain books out now, under the pen name of his parents. Maybe I’ll run into him on the street and he’ll share with my advice…anyone know what he looks like?

Angie goes to the Bookstore

I got lost in the bookstore today. Maybe you saw me. I was the girl with the faulty lid on her coffee cup, (as evidenced by the dark stains down the front of both shirt and jeans), reading picture books in the corner. I read lots and lots of books, and I looked at even more pictures. Here are my favorites:

Puff the Magic Dragon written by Lenny Lipton and Bruce Foster, illustrated by Eric Puybaret
Written by the folks from Peter, Paul & Mary (responsible also for the song), this book has GORGEOUS illustrations. Stunningly beautiful, I almost bought it for a baby shower gift, but the story has a bittersweet ending, so I didn’t. It also comes with a 4-song CD, and the latent soccer mom in me cringed at the thought of having to listen to the same four songs on repeat ad infinitum while I slowly lose my mind.

Wave by Suzy Lee
No words in this book, don’t need ‘em. Delightfully simple and playful illustrations of a girl and a playful wave at the beach.

Chick n’ Pug written by Jennifer Sattler, illustrated by Anna Currey
Hilarious. Love these characters– a chick who idolizes a pug. The pug is oblivious to his own awesomeness, he just wants to nap. To paraphrase my two-pug-having friend, Tim:  ”Pugs naturally lend lend themselves as characters in children’s books just by their very puggishness.”

Rocket Writes a Story written and illustrated by Tad Hills
Totally adored this book, especially as someone in the process of writing/illustrating stories. Rocket is a dog who has learned to read (a bird taught him), and now he wants to write a story. I love Rocket. He is very courageous, because writing is like, hard and stuff. And I have thumbs– you’d think I’d have an advantage, but Rocket finished writing his story (to rave reviews) in just under 32 pages. I’ve been working on mine for 16 months… no end in sight.

Bear has a Story to Tell written by Phillip C. Stead, illustrated by Erin Stead
Endearing. I hold a special place in my heart for bears (they remind me of my dad), and this guy is sweet, simple and classic. Beautifully illustrated– looks like watercolor and pencil, maybe. Love the circular nature of the story.

We are in a Book! written and illustrated by Mo Willems
This book was hilarious. I LOL’d. I love self-referential humor, and the whole book is about a pig and an elephant who are really happy you are reading their book. My favorite line: “This book is going too fast! I have more to give!”  Also love the way the font size varies for emphasis. I want to get all typographical in my books too.

This Is Not My Hat written and illustrated by Jon Klassen
By the author that brought you I Want My Hat Back, this is the same story told from the other perspective and using different characters (fish in this one). Elegant, simple, direct. This book is pure genius, and I love the voice of the narrative.

Bear Snores On written by Karma Wilson, illustrated by Jane Chapman
I didn’t read this one from cover to cover, as my allotted time was running out, but I flipped through enough to get a gist of the story. Really cute bear.

So reviewing this list of books, I have learned a few things about myself:
I prefer stories about animals over stories about people. This goes back as far as I remember. Even when I was the littlest of kids, I didn’t want human dolls– I wanted stuffed animals. I had a vast menagerie, and my goal was to collect every species of animal of which I was aware. Yes, indeed, I *did* have a platypus. What, you didn’t?

Simplicity. I was struck by the elegance and simplicity of these books. Jon Klassen’s book had the simplest of illustrations, varying little from page to page, with lots of repetition. Puff the Magic Dragon had an easily readable yet fanciful style, as if Art Deco had a baby with Minimalism. Mo Willems has a sketchy and naive style- Elephant and Pig look like doodles drawn on a moving bus. Backgrounds in most of them were minimal or non-existent.

In conclusion: I love books! Next time I will go the library, so I can bring them home with me for a bit, but I won’t have to pack them in boxes and carry them next time I move house.

Books from Melissa’s library adventures

For those keeping track, here are the books I’ve read as part of my Lou Year’s Resolution to go to the library in 2013.

  • The Velveteen Rabbit by Margery Williams
  • Three Samurai Cats by Eric A Kimmel
  • Daring Dog and Captain Cat by Arnold Adoff
  • Pilot Pups by Michelle Meadows
  • I Want a Dog by Helga Bansch
  • Monkey – A Trickster Take from India by Gerald McDermott
  • Where the Wild Things are by Maurice Sendak
  • The Berenstain Bears Go Green by Jan & Mike Berestain.
  • See me Dig by Paul Meisel
  • Felicity Floo Visits the Zoo by E.S. Redmond
  • My Friend Rabbit by Eric Rohmann
  • Shrek by William Steig
  • The Lion & the Mouse by Jerry PInkney
  • Noodle & Lou by Liz Garton Scanlon
  • Monster Hug! by David Ezra Stein
  • I Want my Hat Back by Jon Klassen

 

Say what? Two trips to the library????

It’s true, when you focus on something and make it a priority, you actually get stuff done. I think it’s a lesson Loupotamus will learn when he learns to skateboard.

I made it to the library again! Here’s my booty:

I had one mission – check out books about animals. Shrek maybe a long-shot, but ogres are like animals right? As much as they’re like onions (obligatory movie reference). Seven new books!

I’m now going to type something that may sounds like heresy….I’ve never read Where the Wild Things are by Maurice Sendak. Yes, you read that correctly.

I read it yesterday, 50 years after it was originally published. What an exciting, simple, imaginative and timeless story. I think my favorite part was that while I loved the imagery, the story was engaging even without the art.

I hope I can create a story that’s powerful enough to engage kids even without Angie’s brilliant illustrations. One that does justice to Angie’s artwork.

Predator & Prey :: In a Natural Setting

Angie Brown | in a natural setting

Angie Brown copyright 2013

I think my cat dreams about hunting wild couches in some far off land where upholstered furniture roams the plain in vast herds. In this mixed media illustration, Vivi silently stalks an old chaise lounge that has wandered away from the safety of the group. I plan to do two more drawings for this series–a chase scene, and then the gorey kill scene, complete with graphic details of frayed threads, exposed springs and clumps of stuffing lying about. It’ll be gruesomely funny.

I’d also like to point out that “babies” in the herd are ottomans. They’ll grow up one day to be couches, if they’re lucky enough to survive. Life in the wild can be pretty tough.

This piece was done with watercolor, pen and ink, color pencil and chalk pencil on a heavy pinkish paper, of which I have an abundance.